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FOREVER 3/?

  • Jul. 7th, 2008 at 1:12 PM
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Title:  FOREVER 3/?
Author:  leigh1381
Pairing:  Akame
Rating:  GP
Genre:  Romance
Disclaimer:  I own them, in my mind at least   ^__^v
Summary:  How can you express your love for someone who considers you as his best friend
Note: I can’t help but smile while writing this chapter, again tell me what you think I love reading your thoughts regarding the chapter.


Chapter 3

 
Jin keep on asking himself a hundred times already why is he there and why did he agreed in coming then he remembered the incident that morning.
 
 
~ ~ * flashback * ~ ~
 
 
He suddenly woke up from his sleep when he heard a loud good morning from someone who he thinks had a lot of sugar for breakfast. He rubs his eyes sleepily and looked at the owner of that voice.
 
“GOOD MORNING JIN-JIN” Kame said again in load voice. “I’ve brought you your breakfast, so get up, brush your teeth and eat this before it gets cold” and he laid the tray on the side table beside Jin’s bed.
 
“It’s so nice waking up in the morning and seeing your lovely face” Jin said not fully awake but with a blissful smile on his face.
 
“I think you’re still dreaming, Okay this person with a lovely face wants you to get up already” Kame said with an answering smile.
 
Kame went to check Jin’s closet opposite the bed and pulled out some clothes for the other boy and laid it on the foot of the bed.
 
“What? You are still sleeping? I have to do something” and he smiled evilly thinking of ways to wake up the other boy.
 
“First your warm blanket” he mumbled to himself and promptly pulled the blanket off Jin’s body.
 
“TADA”
 
“WOW!” he exclaimed
 
“Sexy long legs” seeing that Jin is only wearing really short boxers, Kame continued to ogle Jin’s legs for a few more minutes but the said boy just shifted on his side and continued to sleep.
 
Then Kame crawled beside Jin and peered at the sleeping boy’s face.
 
“You’re one beautiful guy and your special someone is really lucky to have your love” he thought and again there was the uneasiness he felt.
 
He shrugged the feeling aside because he can’t explain and name what it is.
 
He continued to look at Jin and was deciding either to blow in his ear or tap the other’s nose, he decided just to blow warm breath on the dead to the world Jin but after doing so Jin just scratched his ear and continued sleeping.
 
“You really don’t want to wake up? Time for a much more drastic approach”.
 
He stands on the bed and immediately sits on Jin’s belly.
 
“WAAAAAAAHHHHHH THE ROOF IS FALLING” Jin shouted when he felt the weight around his stomach and tried to sit up, after minutes of flailing he noticed that it’s only in his belly that he can feel the weight.
 
“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?” he shouted to Kame his voice laced with sleep and regarded Kame who continued to sit on his belly and now shaking with laughter.
 
“Good Morning Grumpy Bear” Kame said using a very girly voice and tucked his hair behind his ear for good measure “Are you awake now Honey? It’s time for our breakfast.” he continued to tease the grumpy Jin.
 
Jin retaliated by flipping their positions. He is now on top of the smaller boy and enjoying the feeling.
 
“Good morning sweetcheeks “Jin answered happily playing along “I’m awake now, so what is my reward?
 
“Hmmmmm, reward? I cooked your favorite food for breakfast sweetheart” Kame playfully places his arms around Jin’s neck
 
“Tempting but not enough love, you have to think of something else” and using the back of his hand caressed Kame’s cheeks.
 
“I can’t think of anything right now tweetums” he squirmed under Jin’s weight “You are actually cutting off my blood circulation”.
 
“Are you calling me fat doll?” And pouted for good measure
 
“No darling! Definitely not! Wouldn’t dream of calling you fat”
 
“Okay, so what’s my reward baby?”
 
“I really don’t know dear”
 
“How about I’ll be your first?” he suggested
 
“WHAT?” Kame was scandalized upon hearing this and ceased using the girly voice “FIRST WHAT?”
 
“Kiss of course, I know you haven’t had your first kiss” then Jin grinned evilly “What were you thinking Kazu?”
 
“Nothing” he said feeling the blood rush to his face
 
Jin cupped Kame’s cheeks with both hands “Kazu your face is really red and warm right now, are you by chance thinking of a much more intimate scene” he teased and continued to hold the others cheeks . He could feel that the smaller boy blushed some more
 
“So what about our first kiss?” he asked again
 
“Jin get off me already” and kame struggled some more
 
“Not answering my question, I’ll just do it then” and Jin proceeded to lower his lips to Kame’s face
 
Kame seeing this didn’t move thinking that Jin is only joking but when the other boy’s lips is only an inch or so from his own.
 
“Jin”
 
“What? I’ll just kiss you and then I’ll get up”
 
Kame could feel Jin’s warm breath on his face “Stop teasing me”
 
“Who’s teasing you? I just want my kiss”
 
Kame upon hearing this just heaved a long sigh, closed his eyes, stayed very still and gave up to fact that he is really going to be kissed
 
Jin seeing kame closed his eyes let out a soft sigh and just rubbed the tips of their noses then proceeded to place his forehead against kame
 
“I won’t take your first kiss unless you give it willingly” and I hope I would be the lucky one who will receive it Jin added in his mind.
 
Kame upon hearing this felt a huge disappointment and truth be told he was curious how it would feel to be kissed by Jin’s plump lips.
 
“Come on” Jin get off from Kame and took hold of his hands and pulled him up into a sitting position.
 
“I’ll just take my shower since you’re being a good wife and chose my clothes and then we’ll eat breakfast” He went straight for the bathroom he didn’t notice that Kame didn’t reply to anything he said.
 
Kame was deep in though and didn’t even noticed that Jin already went inside the bathroom. He was asking himself why the huge disappointment when Jin didn’t kiss him, he knows that he was curious and Jin was just teasing him but still he can’t shrug the heavy feeling on his chest.
 
Inside the bathroom Jin leaned his back on the door and wished yet again that he can openly express his feelings for Kame furthermore he was really longing for that kiss.
 
 
******
 
 
“So what’s the catch?” Jin asked the smaller boy
 
They have already finished eating breakfast and Kame was clearing the small table in the middle of the room.
 
“What catch?” Kame pretended that he didn’t understand what Jin had asked.
 
“You know breakfast, coming here early and preparing all of that” Jin still looking at Kame who refused to meet his eyes.
 
Oh oh kame thought busted.
 
“Can’t I be sweet to my best friend?”
 
“Ha! The last time you were extra sweet to me you have asked me to come to school wearing that stupid curly blond wig and Victorian dress for your history make up project”
 
He shuddered remembering the extreme teasing he got from his classmates & schoolmates.
 
“That was only one time and besides you’re very pretty that day” Kame tried to reason to Jin
 
“Do you want me to remind you of some other incidents?”
 
“Oh ok fine! I need a favor from you” Kame gave up knowing Jin knows him to well
 
“Now your talking” Jin feeling smug
 
“Could you go with me on my first date this evening?” there Kame thought it was out the rest should be fairly easy
 
 
******
 
 
Or so Kame had thought because Jin didn’t even let him explain and every time he would open his mouth Jin would immediately give a firm “NO”.
 
Kame changed tactics and used his best weapon against Jin.
 
Damn there was it again Jin thought as he looked again at Kame’s direction who is now sitting beside the window mopping. 
 
His Kazu is playing dirty with him and using his best kicked puppy expression, he could stand the smaller boy following him around the house all afternoon wearing huge watering puppy eyes but seeing this kicked expression on Kame’s face is his downfall, he literally want to pick up Kame and cuddle him.
 
“Kame” Jin said when he can no longer stand it
 
“Yes Jin” he answered right away and slowly turned his head and showed Jin his best forlorn expression
 
“OK, I’ll go with you” He finally conceded to Kame’s request
 
Kame immediately flashed Jin a brilliant smile
 
 
 
~ ~ * end of flashback * ~ ~
 
 
 
So now he was standing beside the excited and can’t keep still Kame waiting for his date to arrive. As time ticks by he was dreading the time of the meeting.
 
“I told you we are too early” Jin complained getting irritated by the minute
 
“It’s much better for us to be early than Yani to wait for me”
 
“But we’re 1 hour early” Jin continuously whined
 
“Please Jin do this for me” Kame pleaded
 
Jin sighed and gave into Kame’s pleading. After a few minutes Jin is still leaning his back on to the wall and Kame did the same but not on the wall but on Jin’s front. Jin smiled at Kame’s action and hugged the smaller boy’s waist.
 
They have been waiting for about 30 minutes when Jin suddenly looked up and saw Yani approaching them and he turned and watched with his own eyes as Kame also saw Yani and a smile blossoming in his face. Jin wanted to cry seeing the joy in Kame’s face. He was really tempted to drag Kame far away from that place. He braced himself for a lot of hurt in store for him that evening.

 
 ~~end of chapter~~

 A / N: I have tried to skip this chapter and start from the date itself but as you can see I don’t have the heart to remove the flashback. This is full of Akame sweetness and floppiness
 

Comments

[info]bellemainec wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 10:24 am (UTC)
methinks you are right in terming this sweetness. Tis lovely. And Jin needs a hug. Very cute! Looking forward (kinda) to the next chapter, I hope there is not a world of hurt in store for either of them.....
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:27 am (UTC)
yes this chapter is a total akame sweetness overload..

i'm happy i have posted this...
[info]jennisz_akame wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 12:50 pm (UTC)
oh it's so goood ^^ it's really cute and you are so good at wrtiting o_o ^^ im waiting for the next chapter, im looking forward to it although i feel bad for jiin :P
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:28 am (UTC)
thank you for the compliment!

please look forward to the next chapter "there be something important happening"

[info]gyelle9 wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
awwwww... poor jin :( will wait for your next update :D
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:38 am (UTC)
yes poor jin and i'm kind of sadistic with him
[info]ylhen12 wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 02:13 pm (UTC)
love the flashback!!^^ so sweet and cute^^!! really love this chapter!!^^
hope jin won't be hurt so much, poor him>_
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:29 am (UTC)
me too i really love this flashback and i'm glad i didn't delete it.
[info]dongbang_sarang wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
OMG.. poor Jin.. and why is Kame even meeting with that girl..
he know he wants Jin, Jin knows he wants Kame.. so what's the problem?! Kame should just give in.. becides, didn't Jin realize by now that Kame has same feelings? (all the blushing and stuff..)
i can't wait for their first kiss..
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:30 am (UTC)
me too i can't wait for there first kiss..lol
[info]puffie_hanchan wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 03:42 pm (UTC)
cute! but sad as well... jin deserves a hug!
thanks (^^) will be waiting for the nx update!
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:43 am (UTC)
yes jin needs alot of hug especially from his kazuya
[info]pink_rose91 wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
oohh....poor jin jin...T__________T

but it's soooooo sweet...^__________^

can't wait for the next chapter ♥♥♥
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:31 am (UTC)
i'm in the middle of writing the next chap...so look forward to it.
[info]chibilover14 wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
Yush... it ish indeed poor Jin.
Haha Kame's secret weapon. XDDD
I can't wait for the next chapter though I know Jin ish gonna suffer... Awesome flashback! Totally cuute!
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:32 am (UTC)
Yes kame's secret weapon is total win
[info]a_addicted wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 05:26 pm (UTC)
ppoor jiin.. but they are so cute.. it was indeed akame sweetness *Q* thank u !! i want mooooreee.. can't wait for the next chapter <3
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:33 am (UTC)
and you'll be getting more coz i haven't yet decided how many chapters to this fic
[info]kawaiikame wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2008 06:57 pm (UTC)
awwwwwwwwwww poor jinjin *O*
but i think kazu chan have feeling for him like love ^___^
thats good XD
ne am waiting for the next chapter so ongeaii update it soon ^__^
gambatte O(>.<)O
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:34 am (UTC)
thank you gambarimasu
[info]muchie05 wrote:
Jul. 8th, 2008 08:08 am (UTC)
i hafta agree with them, lolz that this is the best that i have ever read... ^^ *oh the fluffiness of the story laced with sweet akame kimochi.. ~^^~ goodness

*this cracked by brain..

"Jin retaliated by flipping their positions. He is now on top of the smaller boy and enjoying the feeling."

~~my comento, he is wearing short boxers and sitting on top of kame, is this really GP? *o* i am beginning to think more of in line with R to N-17.. lolz

yup,, write more and lets see where it will lead.. ^^
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 09:35 am (UTC)
lol..i didn't even notice that it was close to NC17ish
[info]muchie05 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 10:20 am (UTC)
lets just say that it was sweet~N-17ish lolz
[info]sruthijayadevan wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
hi
OMG!!^_^ Best Akame fic ever. I cannot wait anymore. Please update soon. Love the akameness in this chapter. ^_^
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2008 05:08 am (UTC)
Re: hi
...."Best Akame fic ever"...WOW what a compliment, thank you, this is my first ever fic and i still need to improve
[info]ichiruki05 wrote:
Jul. 19th, 2008 10:24 am (UTC)
i know pretty late reply but im still gonna comment XD Great as usual ! ^^ gonna move to the next chapter...
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 19th, 2008 11:30 am (UTC)
it's ok, comments are always loved

^____^v
[info]ichiruki05 wrote:
Jul. 19th, 2008 03:08 pm (UTC)
hehe ^^
[info]x_xshinx_x wrote:
Jul. 26th, 2008 06:58 pm (UTC)
T^T!! oh i have to comment again i'm sorry!!! but i'm crying right now T^T this is such a touching chapter! poor jin! have to go with kame on his date! this is such a wonderful fanfic! ^U^
[info]leigh1381 wrote:
Jul. 27th, 2008 04:30 am (UTC)
no need to say sorry as i have said comments are always loved ^___^
i think a bit sadistic in causing jin heartache...lol
[info]nihonjin_tensai wrote:
Oct. 25th, 2008 04:48 pm (UTC)
aaaaah~~ i loved the part where jin hugged him while they were waiting~~~ hehehe^^ im reading next chap!!! thanks!!^_^
[info]ain_chan wrote:
Nov. 14th, 2008 08:08 am (UTC)
... so cute! kame waking up jin! XDD brumpy bear~ yea.. hihi

first kiss! Kame likes Jin and Jin likes Kame! O_O

oh my, poor jin. seeing his loved one going out with another person..

*off to the next chappy*
[info]springswan wrote:
Jan. 10th, 2009 09:47 pm (UTC)
Love this chapter. <33
*dances to next one*
[info]endah96 wrote:
Jan. 30th, 2009 02:05 pm (UTC)
cant said "NO" to KAME kicked puppy eyes! Poor Jin! your heart must be in pain!
I hope you dont mind I add you as my friend :)

[info]suzuki_kiritani wrote:
Mar. 5th, 2009 03:56 am (UTC)
awww!!
sorry thats all i can really say.
its full of good fluffy ness and heartbreak. makes me go awww

i do prefere jin having a tough time like this than kame though hehe